Tracking Pips

This haiku

smashed watermelon
punctuating long last notes
oak galls & crickets

went through many permutations:

oak galls & crickets
long last notes of a summer
passing past crushed watermelon

oak galls & crickets
long last notes of a summer
passing past watermelon crushed

oak galls & crickets
passing long last notes past
watermelon crushed

oak galls & crickets
passing past long last notes
watermelon crushed

And by some leap we get "smashed" and "punctuating".

And so for day 824
16.03.2009