A Study of Achenes
Compressed without the swathe of white space between lines and the indentations, the poem still conveys its subject: the strawberries that serve both as title and first line.
STRAWBERRIESAnd beyond this brief opening segment the poem goes on to remark about there being no need to slice one to reveal what is inside and concludes:
do not
hide their seeds
They scatter
into their own bodies
before
they find ground
There are no bonesDeserves to be visited in its book context along with the other poems in the collection to appreciate the spacing which results in words distributed in a controlled scatter effect spiralling down to page end and over.
to structure its shape,
no peel
through which to plunge
Souvankham Thammavongsa. Small Arguments. "STRAWBERRIES"
And so for day 1019
27.09.2009