Fish Man Air
The opening two lines of "Ghost of a Chance" are set off in a stanza.
You see a manThe poem urges the granting of breathing space but observes
trying to think.
the old consolationsAdrienne Rich
will get him at last
like a fish
half-dead from flopping
and almost crawling
across the shingle,
almost breathing
the raw, agonizing
air
till a wave
pulls it back blind into the triumphant
sea.
Snapshots of a Daughter-in-law
Somehow the gender of the subject matters. And perhaps more so the solitary nature of the endeavour. Regardless, after reading the poem you are more aware of your lungs.
And so for day 1407
20.10.2010